Vine
Once upon a
time on a dull and drizzly Monday afternoon, I found myself trudging what would
become a very familiar five and a half blocks. It was the first time I had made
the walk to my new home from campus since moving in as a student tenant in the
spring of my junior year of college. This particularly drab afternoon was the
tail-end to the kind of Monday that drives people to eat ice-cream for dinner
and promptly go to bed. But what started as a dreary, prototypical Monday
afternoon walk home in the rain, turned into an unexpected unveiling, a
discovery of place.
In the heart of Kalamazoo, Michigan, sandwiched
between downtown and two university campuses, there is a neighborhood named
Vine. The place, which borrows its name from Vine Street, running east to west
through its approximate center, is a vibrant haven for a diverse community of
college students, young families, and entrepreneurs. 75-80% of all properties in the Vine Neighborhood are rentals according
to the Neighborhood Association which also describes the surrounding tree
lined streets as a place for “committed urban pioneers who are reclaiming
historic beauties as single-family homes”. It’s an eclectic place bubbling with
a distinctive culture – not quite like any place I have ever lived before.
As I
followed the rippled and cracked sidewalks of my new neighborhood I was forced
to cross the street in order to detour a half-block-long pool of rainwater
collecting haphazardly in a low point on Davis Street. As I cut across the road,
lamenting the melancholy afternoon, I caught the sight of two children – they
couldn’t have been twelve years old combined – as they were jumping and
stomping in the puddles I had been trying to avoid. Their shrieks of laughter
forced a smile in the corners of my mouth. It seemed to be getting brighter as
I walked past and waved.
I recently met with Stephen Walsh, the proud Director
of the Vine Neighborhood Association and a neighbor of mine. We talked for
nearly an hour about the history of the place we both now call home. Steve, as
he prefers to be called, bragged about the neighborhood, one of the oldest in Kalamazoo.
He told me about the original Dutch
immigrants that first called these streets home back in the 1840’s. Most of the original buildings
have been lost to the passing of the decades but some of the larger, Queen Anne mansions that originally housed the town’s wealthy and influential
families have been saved by owners and organizations like the
Neighborhood Association. By the
turn of the century, the Vine Neighborhood was one of Kalamazoo’s most fashionable neighborhoods. As a result, small businesses, grocery shops,
and bars began to pop up and prosper in the neighborhood. Steve explained that by the early 1900’s residents could live, work, and
shop all within the borders of
the neighborhood. The
place was alive with youth as well as students from all over the area attended The Public School established near the center of the
neighborhood along Westnedge Avenue. Today the building houses the Kalamazoo
Area Mathematics & Science Center. Original pieces of both Kalamazoo College and Western Michigan University can
be found in the Vine Neighborhood
as well, Steve said with a grin.
As the years past and the twentieth century rolled
on, the Vine Neighborhood became
an ideal place for all types of people to live – a trend that Steve
believes still holds true today. Steve
explained that as housing demands
continued to rise for university students and families
alike, once large properties were
subdivided to create smaller lots with more homes. In several cases, he told me, older buildings were
moved back in from the street in order to make room for new houses, resulting in the helter-skelter
patchwork of properties you can see in the neighborhood today. As the neighborhood’s composition changed significantly, students and other low-income groups took
advantage of the newly available, convenient, and affordable housing niche.
As I neared
the intersection of Vine and Davis, I noticed something new; a pair of Chuck
Taylors hanging next to hiking boots along the telephone line. The sacrificial
footwear seemed less like a gang sign and more like artwork; the reality of
which I will never know. As I stopped to snap a picture of the soaked shoes, I
suddenly heard music – saxophone music. Four doors down, a Western Michigan
University graduate student was sitting, shirtless, playing a silver alto sax
under the cover of his porch. I walked up, bewildered by the sight of him, and
introduced myself by asking permission to take his picture.
On Saturday and Sunday mornings the patrons of the
Crow’s Nest – a local breakfast spot –line up out the door and onto the
sidewalk waiting for a table and a good hangover remedy. The house parties and
block parties that fill Vine Neighborhood evenings with music and drunken
pedestrians often end hear at the east end of Vine Street. [Insert information from interview with Chris,
the owner and Manager of the Crow’s Nest – Scheduled for 4/33/12] And it’s not
the only good eatery in the area. Half a dozen small scale, locally owned restaurants
and bars dot the neighborhood.
The rain was
definitely letting up now. I rounded the corner at the base of the hill I lived
on, past a tall rose bush, and was nearly run over by a girl on a bicycle. It
was a girl named Michelle, a classmate, friend, and neighbor of mine. She had
been racing her antique Schwinn down Austin Street, where I lived, also on her
way home from class. Fortunately, the forty-year-old brakes on her bike still
worked and she narrowly avoided knocking my block off. When she stopped to say
hello, and reprimand me for walking so carelessly, she brought up a poem she
had recently written (Michelle fancies herself a poetic soul) about the street
she lived on. “This place is like walking through a poem!” she exclaimed. And
suddenly I too wanted to write about our neighborhood.
Today I still live in the Vine Neighborhood, in a
large, three-story, mold-accented, rental house – with seven other people. My
housemates include an aspiring photojournalist, an Ultimate Frisbee guru, three
National Science Foundation sponsored scholars, two practicing microbrew
specialists, and a bike mechanic. The walls of our nearly 100-year old home hum
with activity. And we are never alone. Across the street, three starving
artists endure and smoke and paint. Next-door, our neighbor Mike – or “Mikey”
as his uniform reads – can be found most nights either barbequing on his front
porch or working on renovations to his recently acquired 1980’s RV out back;
his engorged American Bulldog, Liza, is always by his side, or pooping in our
lawn. Our block perpetually smells of marijuana, charcoal, and mildew. It rings
with the drone of stereos and window fans, punctuated by occasional screams of
laughter and carburetor backfires. Garlic mustard shoots outnumber flower beds,
and it simultaneously looks as if everyone has just moved in is about to leave.
I live on a street named Austin, on a hill named Prospect, in a neighborhood
named Vine. The place is dynamic, potent, and very much alive, and I have to
admit; it’s rubbing off on me.
Paul,
ReplyDeleteI really like that you included history of the neighborhood. It's interesting to see how it has changed over time. I also like the idea of going back and forth between one walk through the neighborhood and the bigger picture. I think it's a little stilted right now, which hit me most when you talked about the student playing sax on the front porch and then transitioned right after into talking about Crow's Nest. I'd like to see a stronger connection between the italicized topics and the rest of the piece.
I'd also like to see more quotes. It would be nice to see Vine through the words of the people you've interviewed, instead of just relaying the information they gave you.
The last (small) thing is the start of your last paragraph. "Today I still live in the Vine Neighborhood" makes me feel like a lot of time has elapsed between when you moved in and when you wrote the piece. Since you've only been there for a month and a half, it's not surprising that you still live there, given that it would be odd to rent for a shorter period of time. Maybe scrap that line and just talk right away about your house.
Great topic! I love the idea of profiling a neighborhood.
Hi Paul,
ReplyDeleteAs I read through your (very well written) piece, I almost feel as if there are two stories here. While I believe the italicized portions work for the first half of the piece, but I think they lose strength in the second half. Perhaps finding a way to combine them or re-order them? For example, what do you think of moving “As I neared” one paragraph up, after “Steve said with a grin”, in order to correlate the original pieces of the university with a real-life example of college students, i.e. the shoes. This might relieve some of the “stilted” tension Maggie speaks of in the transition between saxophone player and Crow’s nest, because the information about what happens in the neighborhood is more directly related to the neighborhood being an “affordable housing niche”. While we’re on the topic of re-arranging, I find the strongest visuals describing the Vine Neighborhood are found predominantly in your last paragraph. I would consider moving it up between paragraphs two and three. This way I get a great example of what “an eclectic place bubbling with a distinctive culture” really looks, feels, and smells like. Play around with the re-ordering and see if that helps.
Great work.
Paul,
ReplyDeleteThis was a fun piece to read. There were many scenes and lots of action - which moved the piece along well. I love the way you show the diversity of the neighborhood through your interactions with the people you encounter.
I also think it’s a bit choppy as of now. I appreciate the change in time and place between the italic and regular paragraphs. It’s fun and it spices things up, but I think it also at times breaks your flow.
I really liked your final paragraph. I had to laugh out loud knowing you and how “hipster” it all seemed. It sounds like a lot of fun and you really brought your space to life.
Other than a few tiny grammatical errors (passed rather than “past”) it looks good - Excited to see how it all turns out!
Steph
Paul,
ReplyDeleteThe history you provide on the Vine Neighborhood was very interesting to me and it grounded your piece in factual information. This was important when you would then write into more first person narration. I have lived in the Vine neighborhood for more than a year and think you captured the strange aura of the place.
Perhaps try to insert more descriptions about the people living in the neighborhood to more fully establish this diversity.
Transitions. While the abrupt change in narration style can be intriguing, I think here they need some finessing. If you are set on inserting these moments to describe the place in which you live, then I think they need to be more smoothly inserted.
Looking forward to reading more.
Hi Paul,
ReplyDeleteI know this is the worst thing to hear, but I really think that your piece begins at the last paragraph; it’s the emotional center of your work, and the first time I connect as a reader to your voice. The details in the previous paragraphs could support your personal hunches about the neighborhood, but it seems like this piece is more about you living in the Vine Neighborhood than the Vine Neighborhood itself. I have two additional sources you may want to use. One is an Index article I wrote about The Crow’s Nest, which might be a good jump-off point for research and includes the history of the building. The second is the super cool interactive website for the 2010 census data that shows tons of information on a block-by-block basis. Stylistically, your italicized paragraphs rely heavily on a passive-voice construction that you might want to play around with, and the word “neighborhood” could use some synonyms: district, quarter, part etc.
Nice job.
Elaine
Paul,
ReplyDeleteI like the back and forth between you walking home and then deciding to write this piece and the information you are gathering. I was a little confused when you said, "Today, I still live in the Vine neighborhood." I don't think that is necessary because I would be really surprised if you moved in between figuring out you wanted to write about it and actually writing it. And while I liked the sections, I felt that sometimes more of a transition was needed.
Also, I used to live in the Vine neighborhood, across the street from the Crow's nest. While it is a great/cool place, it is also very dangerous. I think that to accurately do a profile on Vine you need to get at the dark underbelly of it. There are foreclosed houses, broken bottles, graffiti, and crime. (My bike got spray painted and our neighbor's house was robbed).
Overall, it was interesting and fun to read.
-Jordan